EPISTLE TO MR GRAHAM OF FINTRY. 287 summer, in which he aimed at the style of Pope's Moral Epistles, while at the same time he sought to advance his personal fortunes through the medium of a patron. FIRST EPISTLE TO MR GRAHAM OF FINTRY. When Nature her great masterpiece designed, She formed of various parts the various man. Then first she calls the useful many forth; The caput mortuum of gross desires Makes a material for mere knights and squires; She kneads the lumpish philosophic dough, Then marks th' unyielding mass with grave designs, Last, she sublimes the Aurora of the poles, Nature, well-pleased, pronounced it very good; Such as the slightest breath of air might scatter; Longing to wipe each tear, to heal each groan, But honest nature is not quite a Turk, To lay strong hold for help on bounteous Graham. Pity the tuneful muses' hapless train, Weak, timid landsmen on life's stormy main ! We own they're prudent, but who feels they're good ? So to heaven's gate the lark's shrill song ascends, THE MOTHER'S LAMENT. Ere my poor soul such deep damnation stain, Though, thanks to Heaven, I dare even that last shift! That, placed by thee upon the wished-for height, My muse may imp her wing for some sublimer flight. 289 One cannot but feel that, though the bard guards himself against being confounded with the common herd of patronageseekers, his words truly express somewhat more of a sense of dependence than it is agreeable to contemplate in connection with so proud a name. Anticipation of difficulties had already somewhat'sicklied o'er the native hue of resolution.' TO MRS DUNLOP OF DUNLOP. MAUCHLINE, 27th Sept. 1788. I have received twins, dear madam, more than once, but scarcely ever with more pleasure than when I received yours of the 12th instant. To make myself understood: I had wrote to Mr Graham, enclosing my poem addressed to him, and the same post which favoured me with yours brought me an answer from him. It was dated the very day he had received mine; and I am quite at a loss to say whether it was most polite or kind. Your criticisms, my honoured benefactress, are truly the work of a friend. They are not the blasting depredations of a cankertoothed, caterpillar critic; nor are they the fair statement of cold impartiality, balancing with unfeeling exactitude the pro and con of an author's merits: they are the judicious observations of animated friendship, selecting the beauties of the piece. I am just arrived from Nithsdale, and will be here a fortnight. I was on horseback this morning by three o'clock; for between my wife and my farm is just forty-six miles. As I jogged on in the dark, I was taken with a poetic fit as follows: MRS FERGUSSON OF CRAIGDARROCH'S LAMENTATION FOR THE DEATH Fate gave the word, the arrow sped, 1 'Died here on Monday last [Nov. 19, 1787] James Fergusson, Esq., younger of Craigdarroch. The worth of this truly amiable and much-lamented youth can By cruel hands the sapling drops, The mother linnet in the brake Death! oft I've feared thy fatal blow, Now, fond I bare my breast; With him I love, at rest!' You will not send me your poetic rambles, but, you see, I am no niggard of mine. I am sure your impromptus give me double pleasure; what falls from your pen can neither be unentertaining in itself nor indifferent to me. The one fault you found is just, but I cannot please myself in an emendation. What a life of solicitude is the life of a parent! You interested me much in your young couple. I would not take my folio paper for this epistle, and now I repent it. I am so jaded with my dirty long journey that I was afraid to drawl into the essence of dulness with anything larger than a quarto, and so I must leave out another rhyme of this morning's manufacture. I will pay the sapientipotent George most cheerfully, to hear from you ere I leave Ayrshire. R. B. It is a curious circumstance regarding the brief poem conveyed by this letter, that a copy of it in the possession of Mr Allason Cunninghame of Logan House, Ayrshire, is understood by that gentleman's family to have been sent to his grandmother, Burns's early patron, Mrs General Stewart of Afton, as a deploration of the death of her only son, Alexander Gordon Stewart, who died at a military academy at Strasburg, the 5th December 1787. Allan Cunningham speaks of a copy of the poem in his possession bearing a note by the author, which shews that he really had endeavoured to turn this piece to the account of gratifying two best be estimated by a sketch given of him on his leaving Glasgow College in May last:-"Of all the young men of this age I have ever known, he is by much the most promising. His abilities are equal to anything he chooses to undertake. His understanding is clear and penetrating, and readily comprehends the most abstract subjects. His memory is retentive. He speaks with fluency and perspicuity; he writes with neatness and accuracy. No one can exceed him in the assiduity of his application, and he persists in it with the utmost steadiness, in spite of every allurement. United with all these shining qualifications, he discovers the most gentle temper, simple manners, and the amiable modesty of youth."'-Newspaper Obituary. REMARKS ON AN ADDRESS TO LOCH LOMOND. 291 friends. 'The Mother's Lament,' he says, 'was composed partly with a view to Mrs Fergusson of Craigdarroch, and partly to the worthy patroness of my early muse, Mrs Stewart of Afton.' We may suppose that the parity of the two cases, and their nearness in point of time, had produced but one indivisible impression in the mind of the bard. Yet there is reason to believe that, in his complaisance towards his friends, he was somewhat over eager to gratify them with poetical compliments, and oftener than once caused one to pay a double debt. We shall find that the little poem beginning, Sensibility, how charming, was first written on certain experiences of Mrs M'Lehose, and sent to her, but afterwards addressed to 'my dear and much honoured friend, Mrs Dunlop.' So the reader will perceive that even Burns had his little mystères d'atelier. TO MR PETER HILL. MAUCHLINE, 1st October 1788. I have been here in this country about three days, and all that time my chief reading has been the Address to Lochlomond you were so obliging as to send to me.1 Were I empannelled one of the author's jury, to determine his criminality respecting the sin of poesy, my verdict should be 'Guilty! A poet of Nature's making!' It is an excellent method for improvement, and what I believe every poet does, to place some favourite classic author, in his own walks of study and composition, before him as a model. Though your author had not mentioned the name, I could have, at half a glance, guessed his model to be Thomson. Will my brother-poet forgive me if I venture to hint that his imitation of that immortal bard is in two or three places rather more servile than such a genius as his required ?—e. g. To soothe the maddening passions all to peace.' Address. To soothe the throbbing passions into peace.' THOMSON. I think the Address is in simplicity, harmony, and elegance of versification, fully equal to the Seasons. Like Thomson, too, he has looked into nature for himself: you meet with no copied description. One particular criticism I made at first reading: in no one instance 1 Address to Loch Lomond, a Poem. 1s. 6d. sewed. Hill.' Scots Magazine publication list, Sep. 1788. The poem entitled An Address to Lochlomond is said to be written by a gentleman, now one of the masters of the High School at Edinburgh, and the same who translated the beautiful story of the Paria, as published in the Bee of Dr Anderson.CURRIE (1799.) The author was Dr Cririe, afterwards minister of Dalton, in Dumfriesshire. He published, in 1803, Scottish Scenery, or Sketches in Verse-a handsome quarto of poetry and notes, including the Address to Loch Lomond. Dr Cririe died in 1835. |